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Crazy

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I was crazy once.
They put me in a box,
I died in that box.
The daises grew over my grave
And they tickled my nose.
They drove me crazy
Crazy?
I was crazy once...
Yes, this poem is meant to be simplistic, I do have a bigger vocabulary than a five year old.
Lately in my notebook there have been deep, philosophical poems. Then... one day in the middle of a church sermon... that all changed. The sermon didn't even have anything to do with any of the subject matter in the poem. Yay random church inspiration?

Well… I guess if you tilt your head to the side and squint a little, you can find your philosophical message hidden in there. Tell me what you think it is. Maybe together we’ll find an answer.
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I like the simplicity in it, something like this doesn't need 'big words' to be amazing.